What Really Grinds Your Gears?

[QLR1]

First off I am going to post this and ask for commentary on how it is written. Feel free to ask questions or weigh in on whether or not you would change anything. After we get some responses I will elucidate further. View attachment 586568

Wordy as hell. If I didn't feel any kind of way, I would not bother responding.

Why would the invites be sent out prematurely? Something ain't right.

Other than shortening that email, I'm at a loss.

 

[Medusa50]

Wordy as hell. If I didn't feel any kind of way, I would not bother responding.

Why would the invites be sent out prematurely? Something ain't right.

Other than shortening that email, I'm at a loss.

To answer your question the email to introduce the survey was done after the invites went out. It was purely a case of human error. It was intended to be the other way around so people could anticipate getting it. But
I hear you completely.

 

[Medusa50]

Wordy as hell. If I didn't feel any kind of way, I would not bother responding.

Why would the invites be sent out prematurely? Something ain't right.

Other than shortening that email, I'm at a loss.

Is it professional and worded well?

 

[QLR1]

Is it professional and worded well?

Sounds good to me. Just a comma is needed after By now. I can't think of anything else.

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[SiRacer420]

Here it is again. If you were tagged read this email and provide some feedbackView attachment 586620

Did you send that out? Are you looking for feedback on your leadership?

 

[Wicked]

They looking for you to do their job? Self assessment is just that.

 

[QLR1]

They looking for you to do their job? Self assessment is just that.

You'll be amazed how out of touch people can be... Or pompous.

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[Wicked]

You'll be amazed how out of touch people can be... Or pompous.

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Seeing it first hand

 

["TRUMP"]

Seeing it first hand

Twss

 

[Medusa50]

Did you send that out? Are you looking for feedback on your leadership?

Please hold your questions till the end. Just looking for feedback on the email at the moment.